Penny Mystic
How does this poem sound?
I wrote this for someone who likes horses.
A horse is an animal adored by many.
They are beloved and worth every penny.
A horse is a gift from heaven.
They are the dreams of girls starting at age seven.
A horse is a noble beauty,
With its shiny coat, more precious than a ruby.
A horse is a possession, which the lucky few get to know
They are mystic entities, as a river’s flow.
Emblems of justice and the peak grace
Every horse puts its owner in his place
I like it. I think the last line should put the whole poem into place. You know it just seems like another line when the last line of a poem is usually like the ending or the summary.
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April 11th, 2008 in
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